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An explanation,
but I'm no good at summaries,
no good at subjugation.
Congregations ill at ease, and you
are ever so hard to appease,
darling dear, desperately unaware,
can't you draw any nearer?

I'm throwing bones,
raking in the wind,
my stones cast no shadows
and I can't tell what you're after.

One, two, six, five four,
you know I have far too many favorite numbers,
and I know you can't name any,
they don't matter enough,
so no of course you don't bother,
not when you can have an easier
way to be.

I blow fake smoke down your alley
and you scoff and turn away.
It's all a pity call to drain your sympathies
and twist this fate, this faith I haven't lost yet,
but tell me hotshot, did you ever really have any?

My work covers me in colors,
tries to hide my blandness,
my insecure flaws, so unsure am I,
I can't even decide what to fear about myself.
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It took a cup of coffee, it's all over but the crying,
and we haven't even been trying.

tell me, can you tell me who i've referenced, can you love them like i do?

and you, and you and you, if you could, would you change everything? cause i can't forget you, even though you don't believe me.

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:iconmynameislin:
really like the last stanza

--
"The best lack all conviction; while the worst are full of passionate intensity"
:iconretrofires:
thank you. :D

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.I can't untangle what I feel and what would matter most.

And I'm not proud that nothing will seem easy about me.

Now there's just no point in reaching out for you..
:iconexacerbate:
Again, I almost like the artist comments as much as the actual poem. There's a raw beauty there...

And I love the first sentence. Love love love.

--
how many times
must I tell you
whatever blossoms
is rooted in the dark.


-Ed Ochester, The Muse, Unreconstructed.
:iconretrofires:
It took a cup of coffee, it's all over but the crying, is a line from cup of coffee by garbage. i love garbage. :)

yay. :) ah. this is bittersweet.

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.I can't untangle what I feel and what would matter most.

And I'm not proud that nothing will seem easy about me.

Now there's just no point in reaching out for you..

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